Splendid job old chap...
This is something that I like to see in a first time flash, EFFORT. Most first time flashes don't have this in them but you have joined several others that I have had the pleasure of getting to see take flight on a good highwind. If you stay true and keep up the good work maybe improve your artwork over the next couple of years you could become a fantastic falsh author, I can see that you possess true potential. Again, well done good sir, All My 5 R Belong to U. :3